01-02-2013, 12:27 PM
(12-29-2012, 04:49 PM)Jae Mc Donnell Wrote: This is what I get from eating too much Crimbo chocolate, insomniathanks for thinking about or purity hehe. we're okay with a couple of profanities in the for fun section
Just wanted to trow this out and see how it floats. It's a bit of a stab at myself
If I was to write a poem about myself?
It would probably tell me to fuck off!
Ask me if I drank that cup of cop on,
or if I’d let it go cold on the mentalpiece (mantelpiece)
Ha mental piece;
No but most times calm;
(Sometimes) like a box of screws on a dryer, shaky at best.
But why would I write a poem about myself?
That shits boring

i enjoyed it. does need a look at the tenses within the poem though ....but i guess that's what happens when we write about ourselfs

