I Heard You Chatting

[Pete Ak]

Tectak - thanks again for you comments. I think tho, that I'll need a line by line job done on this to get ideas for an edit, mainly because I've got stuck on it. (It's about three years old.) What I don't want to do is go chasing rhymes for the sake of the structure which probably means a considerable culling is needed, unless I receive other ideas. Thanks again.