Love is War- Critique Please :)

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Love is War- Critique Please :)

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12-29-2012, 07:20 AM

I don't think so, but if it does put them back.

I think it will still work though with the cuts as a spoken piece.

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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Love is War- Critique Please :) - by KbPoetry - 12-21-2012, 04:36 PM

RE: Love is War- Critique Please :) - by billy - 12-21-2012, 04:44 PM

RE: Love is War- Critique Please :) - by KbPoetry - 12-21-2012, 05:13 PM

RE: Love is War- Critique Please :) - by billy - 12-21-2012, 06:50 PM

RE: Love is War- Critique Please :) - by Pete Ak - 12-21-2012, 08:57 PM

RE: Love is War- Critique Please :) - by Todd - 12-29-2012, 12:24 AM

RE: Love is War- Critique Please :) - by KbPoetry - 12-29-2012, 07:01 AM

RE: Love is War- Critique Please :) - by Todd - 12-29-2012, 07:20 AM

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