12-24-2012, 05:02 PM
Your explanation dispels a few clouds from my thinking! The poem breathed new life when could see the relationship between sky and cloud... why not embed that into the title? Do so and a major issue is dealt with.
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untitled (1st draft needs a lot of work i know) - by travelpoet234 - 12-23-2012, 01:32 PM
RE: untitled (1st draft needs a lot of work i know) - by Pete Ak - 12-23-2012, 05:29 PM
RE: untitled (1st draft needs a lot of work i know) - by travelpoet234 - 12-24-2012, 12:09 PM
RE: untitled (1st draft needs a lot of work i know) - by rEVOLVEr - 12-24-2012, 01:28 PM
RE: untitled (1st draft needs a lot of work i know) - by Pete Ak - 12-24-2012, 05:02 PM
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