12-24-2012, 01:28 PM
I would suggest giving some of your imagery amore thou ght.. Most of it feels forced and cliched.
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untitled (1st draft needs a lot of work i know) - by travelpoet234 - 12-23-2012, 01:32 PM
RE: untitled (1st draft needs a lot of work i know) - by Pete Ak - 12-23-2012, 05:29 PM
RE: untitled (1st draft needs a lot of work i know) - by travelpoet234 - 12-24-2012, 12:09 PM
RE: untitled (1st draft needs a lot of work i know) - by rEVOLVEr - 12-24-2012, 01:28 PM
RE: untitled (1st draft needs a lot of work i know) - by Pete Ak - 12-24-2012, 05:02 PM
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