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This Winter (2nd edit)
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12-23-2012, 12:59 PM
Great suggestions Todd. I am a little confused with adding the "I am" to the end of L8 though. When I do that it seems a bit awkward to me. Maybe you could further explain this option, I must be missing something. Your other suggestions are improvements that I will add on my next edit. Thanks for your help.
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This Winter (2nd edit) - by Uncle Vertical - 12-23-2012, 10:30 AM
RE: This Winter - by arbil_poieo - 12-23-2012, 11:22 AM
RE: This Winter - by billy - 12-23-2012, 11:55 AM
RE: This Winter - by Uncle Vertical - 12-23-2012, 12:07 PM
RE: This Winter (1st edit) - by Todd - 12-23-2012, 12:33 PM
RE: This Winter (1st edit) - by Uncle Vertical - 12-23-2012, 12:59 PM
RE: This Winter (1st edit) - by Todd - 12-23-2012, 02:04 PM
RE: This Winter (1st edit) - by Uncle Vertical - 12-23-2012, 02:30 PM
RE: This Winter (2nd edit) - by Todd - 12-23-2012, 09:29 PM
RE: This Winter (2nd edit) - by Uncle Vertical - 12-24-2012, 06:58 AM
RE: This Winter (2nd edit) - by Leanne - 12-24-2012, 07:08 AM
RE: This Winter (2nd edit) - by Uncle Vertical - 12-24-2012, 07:37 AM
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