12-13-2012, 01:27 AM
That gets close to the "realm" of this. I have two poems about the same subject. And I revised this one until most of the narrative was gone over to the other poem, so that all that's left of this one is the experience before a narrative is given to it later by logic. This is the raw experience, as recalled by the senses. I'm still working on "Weather Balloon of Riddle", the longer narrative version.
But your way of looking at it is a helpful insight in the right direction.
But your way of looking at it is a helpful insight in the right direction.
