A frosty walk.

A frosty walk.

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12-09-2012, 07:19 PM

the imagery you give the reader in this is awesome..the description of the hardened frozen grass is just spot on Smile

..LOVE the 2nd stanza

"I’m gleaning in the orchards.
I’m cleaning up. The birds << have pecked and hollowed out, a sudden stop, unlike a word such as 'away' softer and trails..errm
the apple of my sty." away Confused

the sadness in this mixed with beautiful imagery of the surroundings really captures a scene almost perfectly Smile

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A frosty walk. - by cidermaid - 12-08-2012, 07:35 PM

RE: A frosty walk. - by billy - 12-09-2012, 06:00 PM

RE: A frosty walk. - by cidermaid - 12-09-2012, 07:06 PM

RE: A frosty walk. - by TwistedAngel - 12-09-2012, 07:19 PM

RE: A frosty walk. - by cidermaid - 12-10-2012, 01:27 AM

RE: A frosty walk. - by Todd - 12-10-2012, 03:45 AM

RE: A frosty walk. - by cidermaid - 12-10-2012, 04:40 AM

RE: A frosty walk. - by Todd - 12-10-2012, 04:52 AM

RE: A frosty walk. - by billy - 12-10-2012, 12:13 PM

RE: A frosty walk. - by cidermaid - 12-10-2012, 04:22 PM

RE: A frosty walk. - by billy - 12-10-2012, 05:29 PM

RE: A frosty walk. - by rowens - 12-14-2012, 04:09 AM

RE: A frosty walk. - by cidermaid - 12-14-2012, 05:32 AM

RE: A frosty walk. - by heslopian - 12-14-2012, 12:51 PM

RE: A frosty walk. - by cidermaid - 12-14-2012, 03:58 PM

RE: A frosty walk. - by heslopian - 12-14-2012, 04:12 PM

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