an everyday suicide
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(12-09-2012, 05:40 PM)billy Wrote:  
(12-08-2012, 07:59 PM)benthejack Wrote:  with a thrust of self-cherishing the knife slips in,
with attachment a twist,
jealousy, a sideways slice,
pride - sawing motion,
anger hits the carotid.
hi ben
if it were not for the last line, i'd have swore the poem was about an automatic bread knifeBig Grin
haha damn if only that was intentional!

with a thrust of self-cherishing the knife slips in,
with attachment a twist,
jealousy, a sideways slice,
pride - sawing motion,
anger! The toast's too thin.
If something happens and you can remedy it, Why worry?
And if something happens that you can't remedy, Still why worry?

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an everyday suicide - by benthejack - 12-08-2012, 07:59 PM
RE: an everyday suicide - by Wildcard - 12-09-2012, 12:28 AM
RE: an everyday suicide - by benthejack - 12-09-2012, 06:45 AM
RE: an everyday suicide - by billy - 12-09-2012, 05:40 PM
RE: an everyday suicide - by benthejack - 12-09-2012, 05:54 PM
RE: an everyday suicide - by billy - 12-09-2012, 06:10 PM
RE: an everyday suicide - by davidbenjamindix - 12-19-2012, 07:30 AM



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