12-09-2012, 06:45 AM
Cheers Mark,
I'm not really sure if my intent with this poem is clear. it definitely isn't intended to be cutter poetry or even vaguely similar
The suicide and the knife is really just metaphor for the self inflicted suffering our obsession with these unhappy minds creates.
A painful death created by our own tendency to like ourselves a little bit too much. (well I speak for myself, I'm definitely the person whom I think the most about)
I'm not really sure if my intent with this poem is clear. it definitely isn't intended to be cutter poetry or even vaguely similar

The suicide and the knife is really just metaphor for the self inflicted suffering our obsession with these unhappy minds creates.
A painful death created by our own tendency to like ourselves a little bit too much. (well I speak for myself, I'm definitely the person whom I think the most about)
If something happens and you can remedy it, Why worry?
And if something happens that you can't remedy, Still why worry?
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And if something happens that you can't remedy, Still why worry?
www.benjack.co.nz

