Bastard's war
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if am honest..an this maybe more telling anout meself than this poem..but after i wos left untouched by it

many many poems have been written about the whole 'woe is me' thing, for me they have to give something of the author for them to work well

me fave stanza is 3 i thought is the most powerful an well written but overall it didnt leave me feeling anything of the author to actually care about or feel any kind of empathy with

is not badly written at all is just missing that personal touch..in me humble opinion

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Bastard's war - by benthejack - 12-03-2012, 04:19 PM
RE: Bastard's war - by Todd - 12-04-2012, 01:45 AM
RE: Bastard's war - by TwistedAngel - 12-08-2012, 04:54 AM
RE: Bastard's war - by benthejack - 12-08-2012, 01:45 PM



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