12-04-2012, 02:17 AM
Hey Philatone, I agree it does need more grounding and some more insight. Some of it is suppose to be literal and some not. Thank you for reading and for your feedback. Extremely helpful.
Hey Todd, There is one line you crossed out that I feel that I need for the poem, but the rest I can live without. Don't worry about being too radical it's helpful. It's an old poem so with feedback I can approach it differently. Yeah, I suck at titles, have to think of another. Thank you for liking my bones and for your feedback.
Hey Todd, There is one line you crossed out that I feel that I need for the poem, but the rest I can live without. Don't worry about being too radical it's helpful. It's an old poem so with feedback I can approach it differently. Yeah, I suck at titles, have to think of another. Thank you for liking my bones and for your feedback.