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Love Means
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12-04-2012, 01:39 AM
(12-03-2012, 08:45 PM)Todd Wrote: I like this tight little poem. It's a good insight. One option for you: While they work and this might be too sparse for you, you might cut both instances of been. Oh, and maybe make redefining the same tense as resurrect (redefine).Good call, Thank you Todd Thank you Arriedo |
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Love Means - by arbil_poieo - 12-03-2012, 02:31 PM
RE: Love Means - by Arriedo - 12-03-2012, 02:37 PM
RE: Love Means - by Todd - 12-03-2012, 08:45 PM
RE: Love Means - by arbil_poieo - 12-04-2012, 01:39 AM
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