Love Means
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I like this tight little poem. It's a good insight. One option for you: While they work and this might be too sparse for you, you might cut both instances of been. Oh, and maybe make redefining the same tense as resurrect (redefine).
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Love Means - by arbil_poieo - 12-03-2012, 02:31 PM
RE: Love Means - by Arriedo - 12-03-2012, 02:37 PM
RE: Love Means - by Todd - 12-03-2012, 08:45 PM
RE: Love Means - by arbil_poieo - 12-04-2012, 01:39 AM



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