12-03-2012, 12:43 PM
that's a sad fucking poem. my only nit is that the 1st line of the last needs another half foot. other than that i liked it. unexpected end that i can related to.
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The Rape of Intelligence - by Keith - 12-03-2012, 10:01 AM
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