12-03-2012, 09:30 AM
(12-03-2012, 06:40 AM)TwistedAngel Wrote: i wos kinda left disappointed..only cos i wanted to know more
i really enjoyed this an i like that there wos no morbid sense of loss looking back into the authors childhood like so many of these writes can be
i agree with billys point on the &'s they do stick out like bulldogs bollo.....make it asthetically unpleasing to the eye
Yes, maybe i was reading too much Blake stuff with the "ands" at the time as well. i appreciate the constructive tone!!


