Holding On To The Little Things

[nothing_good16]

Not a critique (not the forum for that) just a quick comment: see if you can live without the "is" on Line 5.

It had a light touch and set a nice mood. I liked it.

Thanks...and maybe that would work better with the flow.
(Even though this may be the wrong forum for "critique" but, i wouldn't mind it. --or should I just relocate it?)

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This is sweet while not being too mushy.
It was a good, simple read with nice vocabulary.

thanks