11-30-2012, 01:37 AM
"The soft tattoo
of feet on felt
froze
pitter-patter meaning."
Beautiful image!
My new favorite winter poem. It isn't too wordy and the images themselves seem pure and whimsical like snow falling.
To be honest with you, I'm not going to be much help because I don't see anything wrong with it.
of feet on felt
froze
pitter-patter meaning."
Beautiful image!
My new favorite winter poem. It isn't too wordy and the images themselves seem pure and whimsical like snow falling.
To be honest with you, I'm not going to be much help because I don't see anything wrong with it.