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Sand between my toes
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11-24-2012, 12:11 PM
I like it. While flip and flop may lack some clarity, I found it clever. I also like the crust of bread line better. I see the choices you made and chose not to make and found that I like the rewrite. No issues for me. I like the new title. Nice work.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Sand between my toes - by Keith - 11-23-2012, 09:22 AM
RE: The Windbreak - by billy - 11-23-2012, 10:48 AM
RE: The Windbreak - by Todd - 11-23-2012, 11:10 AM
RE: The Windbreak - by cidermaid - 11-23-2012, 05:26 PM
RE: Sand between my toes - by Keith - 11-24-2012, 08:25 AM
RE: Sand between my toes - by Todd - 11-24-2012, 12:11 PM
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