Everything changes
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She says to me “we should forget our past
for it was convivial while it last.”
She asks for intimacy just one more time
I hold her close like she is mine.

She packs her things, shes got to go
for she is rushed to watch her favorite show
She reaches out like a hugging mime
I hold her close like she is mine.

But now i know that all has changed
I feel so low, hurt, estranged
But i try to play her game, last time.
I hold her close like she is mine.

Hey everyone, this is my second poem. Very personal and i thought it was good so i posted it here Smile

I used Leanne's practice exercise for the kyrielle. I'd suggest all new comers should check them out
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Everything changes - by bunknown - 11-24-2012, 02:39 AM
RE: Everything changes - by cidermaid - 11-24-2012, 04:04 AM
RE: Everything changes - by bunknown - 11-24-2012, 04:40 AM
RE: Everything changes - by cidermaid - 11-24-2012, 06:07 AM
RE: Everything changes - by Leanne - 11-24-2012, 06:09 AM
RE: Everything changes - by billy - 11-24-2012, 02:01 PM
RE: Everything changes - by Art Deco - 11-25-2012, 10:22 PM



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