11-22-2012, 09:17 PM
Thanks for your kind and helpful feedback, Billy
By "can this line be split and separated with a white line?" do you think that the first bit in dialogue should be its own verse?
By "can this line be split and separated with a white line?" do you think that the first bit in dialogue should be its own verse?
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

