They sold me a fairey story

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Hi TwistedAngel

I admired your poem - It was hard-hitting, from the heart and truthful. It highlights a situation that I guess is relevant to many these days.
You'll need to edit by inserting/deleting some of those pesky apostrophes!!

Don't wanna be seen as a killjoy
Stressed out trying to afford the 'right' toy
To do me best for me little boy
Strong opening stanza which got my attention immediately

His mates will receive xbox, playstations, wiis an 3D TV's TVs
He aint old enuff to understand, as I fail to please ain't
Santa didnt listen, is all he sees didn't

Gifts placed at the foot of his bed
Paid from me own soul bled This line seems a bit forced
Wrapped in anguished tears shed

Me brave little soldier
I fear as he grows older
He'll realise why, his worlds so much colder

Never seen his real dad
A mother whos judged as bad who's
All my fault, the chances he'll never have

So heres to the Christmas spirit here's
Bravely I'll smile to give it
Life my child dont miss it
I'll fight everyday for your right to live it

Thanks for sharing this