So Tired

[billy]

For who, and why, do I try?
When I, I am so very tired.
I am so very tired of weary skies,
As if waiting for unruly demise. the opening feels very weak.

For what, and why, must I climb?
Climb, climb, climb
These rocks tremble underneath my feet,
I'll fall at the gentle push of another heartbeat. a solid line, if you can do this one you can do more, it's what's needed so far.

For what, and why, do I fight?
Sacrifices; fallen brothers; social battlefields another good line,
Closer than blood,
Further apart than Mars and Venus

On whose time, under whose rule, do I live? all these lines that are of a sameness, weaken the strong lines.
Confined to the ideas of social medias,
Free to pick the poison of an everyday routine.
A perfectly packaged failure off assembly line.

So for who, and why, do I try?
Isolated mind; lost in seas of many
When I, I am so very tired.
Tell me why, why I try,
I will obtain the the answer, to who am I.
But now I rest; I am so very tired.

in general you have too few images. a few lines work really well but sadly are burdened with lines that feel a lot flatter. the social malaise is there but it isn't their enough.

thanks for the read.