They sold me a fairey story

[billy]

Don't wanna be seen as a killjoy
Stressed out trying to afford the 'right' toy
To do me best for me little boy

His mates will receive xbox, playstations, wiis an 3D TV's
He aint old enuff to understand, as I fail to please ain't old enough
Santa didnt listen, is all he sees didn't

Gifts placed at the foot of his bed
Paid from me own soul bled
Wrapped in anguished tears shed

Me brave little soldier
I fear as he grows older
He'll realise why, his worlds so much colder i like this a lot, including the cliche

Never seen his real dad
A mother whos judged as bad
All my fault, the chances he'll never have

So heres to the Christmas spirit
Bravely I'll smile to give it
Life my child dont miss it
I'll fight everyday for your right to live it

i'm not sure how but we need to sort you out a spell check, till then this online spell checker may help, there are others you could bookmark which may be of help.

apart from some spelling and grammar mistakes, it's a great read. even the cliche works. which is what i was trying to point out on other poems. sometimes they work, like here, sometimes they don't. the poem is sad beyond understanding. hard to comprehend unless you've been in that place. very down to earth and heart wrenching. our family had to go through similar times. not sure the last line is needed

thanks for the read..