Whatever Works
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(11-21-2012, 07:15 AM)Meilhac Wrote:  Crosses or Crescents,
Believe what you want.
O, Judgement day is coming
Don't you worry, enfants.

Sigils or Stars,
Just keep me out of it,
It'll only bring me down,
because i'll never fit.

Colours or Nations,
Are no such things.
What only divide us,
Is the choices HE brings.

ATTENTION: Need a new title - open for answers.
attention: it look like you're calling a dog or soldier to order.

i'd suggest finding a suitable meter and sticking with it. want doesn't rhyme with enfants. (i always thought it was infant) i suggest something along the lines of "two states" for the title though thinking of your own would be more satisfying.

thanks for the read.

it has been indicated to me that enfants is french and pronounced enfont. i'm glad you didn't use Japanese Big Grin
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Whatever Works - by Meilhac - 11-21-2012, 07:15 AM
RE: Whatever Works - by billy - 11-21-2012, 05:38 PM
RE: Whatever Works - by heslopian - 11-21-2012, 06:34 PM



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