11-18-2012, 09:04 AM
That was actually supposted to be two lines, i'll just go edit it 
The only line that's supposted to be long is actually the line with word "impulsive"
Bureaucritized is supposed to stand out, but i'll revisit it, if more find it disturbing
! I love hearing feedback on my work, and hope i can give some later on. First post on this forum.
The only line that's supposted to be long is actually the line with word "impulsive"
Bureaucritized is supposed to stand out, but i'll revisit it, if more find it disturbing
! I love hearing feedback on my work, and hope i can give some later on. First post on this forum.