Mindflow

[Keith]

My Heart is beating
My blood is Flowing...
Between the beats,
There is a Knowing
My mind
is like a River...
Flowing deep, and
at the same time
It is like the Ocean
that the River Seeks

Hi Mayflow looks like youve got some good crits here so just to say I like this and the way it moves along, Ifeel its a powerful topic but at the same time I'm not sure why, hope that makes sense, it brings to mind a song by REM Find the river Thanks for the read. TOMH