The Guide
#4
you scary bastard. and a liar, i turned around and you weren't there Big Grin
i git a feeling of death at first. i still think the same now.

the line;

In my suspended state I could feel the labour in the fabric, the years trapped in each small stitch, tiny traces of light broke like waves beneath the patterns that changed shape as the stranger breathed.

was excellent and full of imagery, nicely done.

thanks for the read.
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The Guide - by Keith - 11-13-2012, 11:54 AM
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