In the void with you

In the void with you

~~Thomas.c.Batten~~ Offline

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11-09-2012, 07:40 PM

just got this one published, thanks for your comments.

'two travelled one' isn't meant to follow the correct syntax, read some e.e. cummings and you'll realise poetry doesn't have to conform to conventional language structures.

[ sorry billy, i think you completely misread the poem.

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In the void with you - by Thomas.c.Batten - 11-05-2012, 08:46 PM

RE: In the void with you - by Wildcard - 11-06-2012, 09:06 AM

RE: In the void with you - by Aish - 11-06-2012, 10:19 AM

RE: In the void with you - by billy - 11-06-2012, 11:03 AM

RE: In the void with you - by Philatone - 11-07-2012, 03:06 PM

RE: In the void with you - by Thomas.c.Batten - 11-09-2012, 07:40 PM

RE: In the void with you - by billy - 11-10-2012, 08:01 AM

RE: In the void with you - by Leanne - 11-10-2012, 08:28 AM

RE: In the void with you - by billy - 11-10-2012, 08:28 AM

RE: In the void with you - by Thomas.c.Batten - 11-10-2012, 08:39 AM

RE: In the void with you - by addy - 11-10-2012, 03:46 PM

RE: In the void with you - by Rose Love - 11-11-2012, 03:49 AM

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