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#11

11-06-2012, 10:54 AM

I like version 3. I think the new opening is a stronger choice.

Just my lodestone pointing toward north thoughts.

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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Hypnotic - by Aish - 11-04-2012, 10:13 AM

RE: Hypnotic *adult content* - by Todd - 11-04-2012, 01:04 PM

RE: Hypnotic *adult content* - by Aish - 11-05-2012, 01:33 AM

RE: Hypnotic *adult content* - by Wildcard - 11-05-2012, 01:55 AM

RE: Hypnotic *adult content* - by Aish - 11-05-2012, 02:17 AM

RE: Hypnotic *adult content* - by Wildcard - 11-05-2012, 02:30 AM

RE: Hypnotic *adult content* - by billy - 11-05-2012, 05:15 PM

RE: Hypnotic *adult content* - by Todd - 11-05-2012, 09:17 PM

RE: Hypnotic *adult content* - by Aish - 11-06-2012, 10:30 AM

RE: Hypnotic *adult content* - by billy - 11-06-2012, 10:43 AM

RE: Hypnotic *adult content* - by Todd - 11-06-2012, 10:54 AM

RE: Hypnotic *adult content* - by Aish - 11-06-2012, 04:31 PM

RE: Hypnotic - by billy - 11-06-2012, 06:44 PM

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