Martial

Martial

Aish

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#22

11-05-2012, 02:11 AM

I really like the revision, Leanne.

As a whole the piece is striking and thoughtful, but the second strophe is flat out haunting.

I say "Publish that bitch"! If you haven't already, that is. Smile

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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Martial - by Leanne - 09-23-2011, 01:30 PM

RE: Martial - by Aish - 09-23-2011, 02:55 PM

RE: Martial - by John Holland - 09-23-2011, 08:54 PM

RE: Martial - by only rob - 09-23-2011, 10:38 PM

RE: Martial - by Patrick Traveler - 09-24-2011, 07:13 AM

RE: Martial - by abu nuwas - 09-24-2011, 07:46 AM

RE: Martial - by Leanne - 09-25-2011, 01:34 PM

RE: Martial - by Wildcard - 09-30-2011, 07:16 PM

RE: Martial - by Leanne - 10-01-2011, 07:08 AM

RE: Martial - by Wildcard - 10-01-2011, 07:20 AM

RE: Martial - by Leanne - 10-01-2011, 10:18 AM

RE: Martial - by abu nuwas - 10-02-2011, 07:12 AM

RE: Martial - by Leanne - 10-02-2011, 07:16 AM

RE: Martial - by abu nuwas - 10-02-2011, 07:42 AM

RE: Martial - by billy - 10-04-2011, 04:32 PM

RE: Martial - by Leanne - 10-06-2011, 05:20 AM

RE: Martial - by Leanne - 11-03-2012, 10:18 AM

RE: Martial - by Todd - 11-03-2012, 01:06 PM

RE: Martial - by billy - 11-03-2012, 03:05 PM

RE: Martial - by Leanne - 11-03-2012, 04:13 PM

RE: Martial - by billy - 11-04-2012, 09:31 AM

RE: Martial - by Aish - 11-05-2012, 02:11 AM

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