11-04-2012, 10:13 AM
Version3
Hypnotic
your tongue
slips and skips,
like
the navel
of the sea
salmonswimming
upstream
as it scribes
liquid aums
in
the magnetized silk
of my vagina -
before you
crucify me,
nailing my palms
to undulant dissolution
galaxies
pouring
from my mouth.
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Version 2
Hypnotic
like
the navel
of the sea
your tongue
slips and skips,
salmonswimming
upstream
as it scribes
liquid aums
in
the magnetized silk
of my vagina -
before you
crucify me
to undulant dissolution
galaxies
pouring
from my mouth.
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Version 1
Hypnotic
like
the navel
of the sea
your tongue
slips and skips,
salmonswimming
upstream
as it scribes
liquid aums
in
the magnetized silk
of my vagina -
before you
crucify me,
nailing my palms
to undulant dissolution
galaxies
pouring
from my mouth.
Hypnotic
your tongue
slips and skips,
like
the navel
of the sea
salmonswimming
upstream
as it scribes
liquid aums
in
the magnetized silk
of my vagina -
before you
crucify me,
nailing my palms
to undulant dissolution
galaxies
pouring
from my mouth.
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Version 2
Hypnotic
like
the navel
of the sea
your tongue
slips and skips,
salmonswimming
upstream
as it scribes
liquid aums
in
the magnetized silk
of my vagina -
before you
crucify me
to undulant dissolution
galaxies
pouring
from my mouth.
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Version 1
Hypnotic
like
the navel
of the sea
your tongue
slips and skips,
salmonswimming
upstream
as it scribes
liquid aums
in
the magnetized silk
of my vagina -
before you
crucify me,
nailing my palms
to undulant dissolution
galaxies
pouring
from my mouth.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?