Martial

[Todd]

I know I haven't commented yet Leanne. Honest answer (as always): it's got good breaks. It's solid. The thing that makes it publishable for me is the idea of the speaker diminishing themselves to burrow and hide inside the skin of these dim lights. As a stand alone it's good enough. If it was in a collection where you could make this one point of a broader theme, it would sing.

Quick answer: yes