Life of Blah

[billy]

Ive got bubble gum thoughts and sneaker dreams great first line. it feels like youth.

A mouth full of thoughts running on high beams i'm at a loss

Black and bruised windows, the fog infested kind i like the image but i can't tie it in to anything that went before it.

A penny for your thoughts, cliche a dollar to change your mind

Discount all your beliefs, mark up the pleasures of the wrong

Put right into your pocket, the cost to tag along

Lint and silly string are treasures beyond gold another good line but how does it tie in

Nonsense and Blah makes up the shit we're told

If its (it's) thought of and serves a purpose, convenience becomes the proof

Question the sanity of everything or the insane becomes the truth

Every one is infected so spread some sparkle with your germs

Let your mind do your moulding, live your life on your own minds terms

it feel like a rant but i can't see a clear rant, it feels like a nonsense poem that makes no sense. i get lots of anger but it doesn't feel funnelled or cohesive, there are some really good lines in there but they feel isolated,

thanks for the read.