Ever Higher

[billy]

i'm into religious poetry but i'll leave some feedback nonetheless.

i see the leaving of the cocoon as entering the heaven of choice.
it has the feel of being a song more than it does of being a poem;
possibly gospel. the trouble with me when it comes to preaching
through poetry, is the fact that it has no effect on me. so in that
sense it feels a little week. it doesn't change my perception or emotion as to what i've just read.

thanks for the read.