Take me dancing

[billy]

A trickle of juice, sets the mind loose
Volume switch, room enriched
Hydro-jet, towel pet
Mirror stare, body bare
Foam cake, blade scrape
Muscle flex, face stretch

Trickles of Juice’s set the mind looses would 'loose' be better?
Potions applied, heavy side
Mirror glare, oh yeh
Track change, go insane
Hairbrush-hand, mic stand
Disco dance, pants prance this verse really does capture the mentality of young male clubbers

Truckles of sluice, sets the blind Moose this line feels a bit forced, did you mean mousse?
Doorbell, bloody hell
Outside, into ride
Face cut, tissue stuck
Shirt on, button gone
Arrive club, pavement stood

Wing-Mirror Pout, ladies look out

some grammar nits but
a thoroughly enjoyable write. i've not only acted this way, i've seen my adopted sons do it many many times a good fun poem.
thanks for the read.