Apology
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(10-06-2012, 08:04 AM)Leanne Wrote:  I am a two-faced rasp
to shred the conscience of others

I haven't one of my own
You can be clever, sarcastic and slightly intimidating with your words . . . in this poem you demonstrate a basic principle that carries over from public speaking- you demand both attention and respect from the nature of the words. Bravo for making me feel a little tricked by the end of the poem. I was looking for the normal cliche tie-in, but you came with the 'above-it-all' sneer that made me chuckle . . . mostly at myself Smile

So clever . . . when you shit I bet it is shaped like tea leaves Hysterical

^I'm high. Anyway . . . Confused good poem . . .
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Messages In This Thread
Apology - by Leanne - 10-06-2012, 08:04 AM
RE: Apology - by billy - 10-06-2012, 08:22 AM
RE: Apology - by Leanne - 10-06-2012, 08:24 AM
RE: Apology - by billy - 10-06-2012, 08:26 AM
RE: Apology - by Wildcard - 10-06-2012, 08:51 AM
RE: Apology - by billy - 10-06-2012, 09:13 AM
RE: Apology - by just mercedes - 10-06-2012, 02:01 PM
RE: Apology - by rowens - 10-06-2012, 02:26 PM
RE: Apology - by MrA - 10-06-2012, 07:36 PM
RE: Apology - by Leanne - 10-07-2012, 03:11 PM
RE: Apology - by billy - 10-07-2012, 03:39 PM
RE: Apology - by Leanne - 10-07-2012, 03:42 PM
RE: Apology - by rowens - 10-08-2012, 12:29 AM



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