10-06-2012, 08:51 AM
(10-06-2012, 08:04 AM)Leanne Wrote: I am a two-faced raspYou can be clever, sarcastic and slightly intimidating with your words . . . in this poem you demonstrate a basic principle that carries over from public speaking- you demand both attention and respect from the nature of the words. Bravo for making me feel a little tricked by the end of the poem. I was looking for the normal cliche tie-in, but you came with the 'above-it-all' sneer that made me chuckle . . . mostly at myself
to shred the conscience of others
I haven't one of my own

So clever . . . when you shit I bet it is shaped like tea leaves

^I'm high. Anyway . . .
good poem . . .

