09-30-2012, 02:57 AM
I love the idea of paradise in the flesh.
This is a stark opposite to the idea of embracing Divinity through sex, which rings true in a concrete, physical need to grab the blood and dirt of human experience, bury in deep, and look at the waiting oblivion with resolute disdain.
S2L5 could be restructured to something more along the lines of "but darkness is necessary to see". The futility is palpable.
Age craving youth is about as real as it gets. The first time I read through I couldn't help thinking of Ed Gein.
This is a stark opposite to the idea of embracing Divinity through sex, which rings true in a concrete, physical need to grab the blood and dirt of human experience, bury in deep, and look at the waiting oblivion with resolute disdain.
S2L5 could be restructured to something more along the lines of "but darkness is necessary to see". The futility is palpable.
Age craving youth is about as real as it gets. The first time I read through I couldn't help thinking of Ed Gein.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?