As the Day

[MrA]

in the reply you say stealing her youth, i.e. taking her virginity or essence and that would be much clearer as to what the guy wanted. from borrowing i got an idea of him seeing through her eyes. it's why i presumed daughter. i get what you're saying about being agnostic but the read doesn't or didn't suggest the fact to me. for instance you don't know i'm 5 ft 8 inches tall or that i'm a non believing Christian.
thanks for taking the feedback without gutting me

Yeah, but now I know. Just don't wanna be too direct when I'm writing, which has it's,disadvantages, but requires a bit of thought and people can often see something that,I couldn't. Nothing to gut for.