09-22-2012, 10:20 PM
Simple, honest and well presented. My weights' loneliness is also growing by the day in my bedroom. Quite liked this one, maybe because it resonates so well.
Only problem I felt was 'athletes feet'. I'm sure it can work as a plural with 'foot' and there should be an apostrophe in 'athletes'. Just my opinion though; great observations.
Only problem I felt was 'athletes feet'. I'm sure it can work as a plural with 'foot' and there should be an apostrophe in 'athletes'. Just my opinion though; great observations.