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Guinevere

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The Dog's Bollocks.

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Joined: Dec 2009

09-06-2012, 08:45 AM

You found us out Hysterical

Seriously though, I really liked it... You managed to tell a textured, nuanced story in some few simple lines. I thought the last stanza was an especially nice take

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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Guinevere - by rowens - 09-05-2012, 04:59 AM

RE: Guinevere - by addy - 09-05-2012, 10:28 AM

RE: Guinevere - by billy - 09-05-2012, 10:42 AM

RE: Guinevere - by rowens - 09-06-2012, 01:53 AM

RE: Guinevere - by billy - 09-06-2012, 08:41 AM

RE: Guinevere - by addy - 09-06-2012, 08:45 AM

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