And you are? :

[tectak]

thanks for the feedback ray.
and yes, i can see where you're coming from. it is one of the drawbacks with the form.
i like the suggestion of a different style of poem using the refrains as a start and end point
for a new poem

i know i know, it;s tom
leanne just gave me the heads up
sorry tom, for some reason i just remembered you as a ray

I suppose you expect forgiveness? Well forget it.....it's better if you owe me one.