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09-04-2012, 05:35 PM

(09-04-2012, 05:24 PM)billy Wrote: thanks for the feedback ray.
and yes, i can see where you're coming from. it is one of the drawbacks with the form.
i like the suggestion of a different style of poem using the refrains as a start and end point
for a new poem

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And you are? : - by billy - 09-01-2012, 05:36 PM

RE: And you are? : - by Leanne - 09-01-2012, 05:47 PM

RE: And you are? : - by billy - 09-02-2012, 07:02 AM

RE: And you are? : - by Leanne - 09-02-2012, 07:06 AM

RE: And you are? : - by tectak - 09-04-2012, 05:15 PM

RE: And you are? : - by billy - 09-04-2012, 05:24 PM

RE: And you are? : - by billy - 09-04-2012, 05:35 PM

RE: And you are? : - by tectak - 09-04-2012, 11:10 PM

RE: And you are? : - by addy - 09-04-2012, 05:24 PM

RE: And you are? : - by Leanne - 09-04-2012, 05:36 PM

RE: And you are? : - by billy - 09-04-2012, 05:40 PM

RE: And you are? : - by billy - 09-05-2012, 04:06 PM

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