09-02-2012, 07:02 AM
thanks leanne, i thought i'd have probs with the memories as it spoken with two syls in places.
and it's weird, i was originally going to make the astray line a grey rhyme but it felt a bit obvious so i altered i at the last minute
once again thanks for the feedback and kind words.
and it's weird, i was originally going to make the astray line a grey rhyme but it felt a bit obvious so i altered i at the last minute
once again thanks for the feedback and kind words.
