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[billy]

the rant is obvious though it does feel a little to prose.
some of the poetic devices define it as a poem but it
feels too clinical. it also feels a little to much tell. while
the poem is okay, i'd have liked to see some of the
instances of spam etc, specially with a bit of humour.
"i don't want you're double glazing
and
"you can slide your credit card up arse"
a few images would go a long way.

thanks for the read.