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[raymond trevitt]

@addy....it's sort of an extension of the 'unrequited' thought I was playing with,so 'afar' and 'stars' seem to be connected,at least in my mind-@billy,this little piece threatened to turn itself into a limerick type rhyme and I didn't want that,still, as ever, a work in progress - @ leanne, I'd never pass up an opportunity to play with my meter, but there are ladies on this site and they might object.