False Advertising
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Nice bit of philosophising Smile

I think you've got a good opportunity to play with your meter here -- this is what I'd probably do if it was mine:


Quote:Did it make any difference that I loved her?
Did it change the course of planets?
Did it change the course of stars?
If not then I truly must wonder
If love can really bring the thunder --
Was loving her my greatest blunder
Or do I still love her
from afar?
It could be worse
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False Advertising - by raymond trevitt - 08-18-2012, 02:31 AM
RE: False Advertising - by Leanne - 08-18-2012, 08:55 AM
RE: False Advertising - by raymond trevitt - 08-18-2012, 12:45 PM
RE: False Advertising - by billy - 08-18-2012, 09:27 AM
RE: False Advertising - by addy - 08-18-2012, 09:48 AM
RE: False Advertising - by raymond trevitt - 08-18-2012, 12:25 PM
RE: False Advertising - by Leanne - 08-18-2012, 12:31 PM



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