08-01-2012, 12:06 AM
I will never regard ducks in the same way. ("Make Way for Ducklings" is forever ruined for me now)
Bottom dweller shite narcissism, I like it, and also its continued 'head up it's own arse' analysis of itself, as Todd says, saves us a step.
A bit Bukowskish, a little Franz Wrightish - all and all a self involved curmudgeon of a poem (but I've already said that, haven't I?). It does go on about itself, and I don't think bolding some words added anything to it.
cheers,
ruth
Bottom dweller shite narcissism, I like it, and also its continued 'head up it's own arse' analysis of itself, as Todd says, saves us a step.
A bit Bukowskish, a little Franz Wrightish - all and all a self involved curmudgeon of a poem (but I've already said that, haven't I?). It does go on about itself, and I don't think bolding some words added anything to it.
cheers,
ruth
“Give me silence, water, hope
Give me struggle, iron, volcanoes.”
― Pablo Neruda
Give me struggle, iron, volcanoes.”
― Pablo Neruda

