i quite liked the spoilered version 
i know i feel some kind of obligation to give feedback, and i do so on anything. maybe it's a new form called wtf poetry where the blanks are fille3d in and we all go "now i get it" maybe it's just a statement on where we've got to....
it's like, i know i have two or three poems to critique..note the word "have"
it's not that want to critique them i really do have to. i'm beginning to think the poem has a whole lot more relevance than i originally gave it credit for.
it makes or made me think .
(07-31-2012, 03:41 AM)Todd Wrote: Well it does remove a step if we critique ourselves I guess.maybe that's what the poems all about. poets blustering on about poets
i know i feel some kind of obligation to give feedback, and i do so on anything. maybe it's a new form called wtf poetry where the blanks are fille3d in and we all go "now i get it" maybe it's just a statement on where we've got to....
it's like, i know i have two or three poems to critique..note the word "have"
it's not that want to critique them i really do have to. i'm beginning to think the poem has a whole lot more relevance than i originally gave it credit for.
it makes or made me think .