07-29-2012, 07:24 AM
Todd shows how you can condense a line which also takes out some of the packing, (excess words)
if that's not your cup of tea, just write it in your own words.
if you want to use the word wall you could say;
Scratched in blood; sullen-red
on the wall behind my dresser
there are many way you could write it.
if that's not your cup of tea, just write it in your own words.
if you want to use the word wall you could say;
Scratched in blood; sullen-red
on the wall behind my dresser
there are many way you could write it.